Hi Josh, I think this is a really good elevator pitch. You hook the audience right away with your choice introduction and then you are knowledgable about the product that you are offering which is crucial. As you move forward in fleshing out your ideas with this business, you would just want to include those in your pitch. Such as pricing, or different details that would hook your audience even more. You are confident and it seems like you have a great idea brewing.
Hi Josh,
ReplyDeleteI think this is a really good elevator pitch. You hook the audience right away with your choice introduction and then you are knowledgable about the product that you are offering which is crucial. As you move forward in fleshing out your ideas with this business, you would just want to include those in your pitch. Such as pricing, or different details that would hook your audience even more. You are confident and it seems like you have a great idea brewing.