Thursday, March 29, 2018

Assignment 22A- Elevator Pitch No.3


Yeah, I definitely think practice makes perfect. Last pitch I had feedback that it was much better, so it gave me confidence to keep going and do even better again. This time the pitch was 60 seconds, so I had to speed up and really try not to stumble when making my pitch. I was a bit over the time limit which is something I will have to work on. No feedback was silly, and mostly all were very positive saying I was doing better. I think the exposure effect of being in front of a camera helps a lot in making better pitches. It is crazy how less awkward it feels the 3rd time around. It still feels a bit uncomfortable, but not merely as bad as the first time. 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Josh,
    I think you did very well on this elevator pitch. You sounded confident in the way you presented your material and it sounds like you are comfortable with your business idea. I still think there could be a little more emotion instead of a mostly monotone voice, but other than that, it was well done. I think if you were to actually pitch this idea to someone, you would do vey well as you confidence would be a great seller.

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  2. Your confidence of the product was both visible and audible with the way you approached this elevator pitch #3. There is another gear I think you can go to and maybe that will bring out the best you have to offer, but as far as the three that you have presented to far, this was far and away the best performance you have showed.

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