I thought the feedback that was most useful was to speak a little longer because my last pitch was a little too short. Also, people tended to like the tone I used and how it sounded, so i tried to keep that stable as well. Most of the feedback I assumed was very positive, so I tried to just repeat what I did but make sure I hit the time requirement. None of the feedback was silly thankfully so everything was constructive. I think this time it felt a little more natural, and hopefully will continue to get better and better.
Good work. I watched both of yours and you can tell that you took the time to fix what you needed to and leave what was good. Your tone and sound stayed good and you didn't lost yourself in your changes. The pitch length was much better and I think it is very close to being ready to use any elevator you are in after this!
Hi Josh, I think you took the feedback you received from the last pitch and incorporated it very well into this one. You spoke very clear and from your tone and the way you spoke, you portrayed that you knew what you were talking about which is key. Maybe for the next one, you try and do a less monotone voice and add a little "emotion" because I think that helps you sell even more because people tend to get excited about things when other people are excited as well. But overall it was very well done and you know what you are doing!
Good work. I watched both of yours and you can tell that you took the time to fix what you needed to and leave what was good. Your tone and sound stayed good and you didn't lost yourself in your changes. The pitch length was much better and I think it is very close to being ready to use any elevator you are in after this!
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ReplyDeleteI think you took the feedback you received from the last pitch and incorporated it very well into this one. You spoke very clear and from your tone and the way you spoke, you portrayed that you knew what you were talking about which is key. Maybe for the next one, you try and do a less monotone voice and add a little "emotion" because I think that helps you sell even more because people tend to get excited about things when other people are excited as well. But overall it was very well done and you know what you are doing!